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I am afraid that he will die
and you won't call me.
I am afraid that she will die
and I will have to call you.

If you or I die,
don't worry
(you never do).
We won't have to talk
(I hope).
:iconnot-in-my-head:

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Summer 2008

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:iconrosiekinns:
I like the mystery and simplicity of this poem. Very intriguing!
:iconskeevy:
I agree with Rosie. I love imagining these three four characters (he, she, you and the narrator), and the complexity of their relationship is illuminated by this little life and death glimpse. Cool.

--
:pride: - skeevy loves you

"Take me with a grain of salt."

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